A Father and Daughter

I may have explained myself poorly, but I think I was referring to the fact that the MC's stepdaughter was almost raped and not the stepsister. In any case he should play again to be sure.

Ouch, sorry to hear that. If I was good at what you used to make them. I could help you.

No need to. Some people upload games in other languages than english. While i think it was worth mentionning so people wouldn't be surprised it was fine as it was. Well an english version did allow me to play your game, so thanks.

Game switches back to spanish around the picture incident though "Por que haces..." and "Dime tu nombre."

There is also a couple occurences during wich i suspect you've been offered several translations and copied both instead of chosing one. I think so because on these occurences there are two times the same sentences with sometimes a small variation in them.

There are also recuring occurences of Valentine's mother being referenced to as male -He or Him- while it should be "she" or "her". Same with Valentine herself when the Main Character interrogates himself about his decision to tell her about the dreams.

After the MC told Valentine he promises they'd meet again i ran into an error, probably a missing or not well referenced picture

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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script

    scene 109ss with dissolution

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>

    scene 109ss with dissolution

NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script

    scene 109ss with dissolution

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 1439, in execute

    paired = renpy.python.py_eval(self.paired)

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2276, in py_eval

    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)

  File "renpy/python.py", line 2269, in py_eval_bytecode

    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>

    scene 109ss with dissolution

NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19041

Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266

A Father and Daughter 1.3.1

Thu Dec 22 10:31:29 2022

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I tried various playthrough, maybe i did not pick every options, but i think that's the gist of it

It was a nice little game, i wonder what's next, keep up the good work.