Let's see if I understood correctly, the mother is a liar, the stepfather rapes her while she sleeps, the stepsister spreads lies that she is a slut after almost being raped by her classmates, and the father can't think of a better idea than to send her back to that house. Sounds like the premise of an NTR game to me.
I played through the game. Did I miss something. I don't remember stepsister almost getting raped and was there an actual scene of the stepfather raping his stepdaughter?
I may have explained myself poorly, but I think I was referring to the fact that the MC's stepdaughter was almost raped and not the stepsister. In any case he should play again to be sure.
I think I'm going to replay the game to be able to clearly indicate what my doubts are, it's been a while since I played and I'm not sure I remember the events well.
The new version has setbacks due to a problem that happened to my computer, so I must redo the characters, in addition to my plans to buy a graphics card to optimize and improve the next installments.
I don't know the method, even from beginner's methods. However, I have reasons for having done it this way, silly reasons that, most likely, have a solution.
No need to. Some people upload games in other languages than english. While i think it was worth mentionning so people wouldn't be surprised it was fine as it was. Well an english version did allow me to play your game, so thanks.
Game switches back to spanish around the picture incident though "Por que haces..." and "Dime tu nombre."
There is also a couple occurences during wich i suspect you've been offered several translations and copied both instead of chosing one. I think so because on these occurences there are two times the same sentences with sometimes a small variation in them.
There are also recuring occurences of Valentine's mother being referenced to as male -He or Him- while it should be "she" or "her". Same with Valentine herself when the Main Character interrogates himself about his decision to tell her about the dreams.
After the MC told Valentine he promises they'd meet again i ran into an error, probably a missing or not well referenced picture
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script
scene 109ss with dissolution
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>
scene 109ss with dissolution
NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script
scene 109ss with dissolution
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1439, in execute
paired = renpy.python.py_eval(self.paired)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2276, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2269, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>
scene 109ss with dissolution
NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
A Father and Daughter 1.3.1
Thu Dec 22 10:31:29 2022
[/code]
I tried various playthrough, maybe i did not pick every options, but i think that's the gist of it
It was a nice little game, i wonder what's next, keep up the good work.
They beat me to it. lol. I was going to let you know aswell. I play a lot of these games and I tend to watch for bugs and such. Guess being a programmer helps. hehe. I like the game so far, can't wait for the update.
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NTR Warning! WTF .... (NTR tag...)
The NTR is optional in the visual narrative.
Let's see if I understood correctly, the mother is a liar, the stepfather rapes her while she sleeps, the stepsister spreads lies that she is a slut after almost being raped by her classmates, and the father can't think of a better idea than to send her back to that house. Sounds like the premise of an NTR game to me.
I played through the game. Did I miss something. I don't remember stepsister almost getting raped and was there an actual scene of the stepfather raping his stepdaughter?
I may have explained myself poorly, but I think I was referring to the fact that the MC's stepdaughter was almost raped and not the stepsister. In any case he should play again to be sure.
I say yes, or send me a message on discord and tell me what you didn't understand within the narrative and I'll be happy to do it.
I think I'm going to replay the game to be able to clearly indicate what my doubts are, it's been a while since I played and I'm not sure I remember the events well.
still no new version? I can't wait to see what's next
The new version has setbacks due to a problem that happened to my computer, so I must redo the characters, in addition to my plans to buy a graphics card to optimize and improve the next installments.
I am sorry you have to wait.
Ouch, sorry to hear that. If I was good at what you used to make them. I could help you.
I appreciate the pure intention, but it is not difficult to recreate everything, the problem is the time it will take me
How come I cannot download the game for PC? Says Invalid archive or something
If you like, go to the discord channel, create a dedicated channel for you to download if itch presents problems.
https://discord.gg/bWF6rDwAqh
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q_ytdZOvMfzxRX4IM6F8p5OIm7EUtUrr/view?usp=drivesdk
Thanks!
winzip calls this an invalid archive. what do?
For which equipment do you want to download?
windows
iOS IPA please 🙃
I will endeavor to prepare the package for the iOS system, last time it presented difficulties.
If you really want to have two languages in your game, why not add a language switch in the settings? Just a suggestion for next update.
I don't know the method, even from beginner's methods. However, I have reasons for having done it this way, silly reasons that, most likely, have a solution.
Yeah I was hoping to try this game out.
Seems to be fixed.
NO ENGLISH
A thousand apologies, the correct version will be uploaded shortly.
Seems to be fixed.
I have noticed the error, I will upload the correct file immediately. Again, a thousand apologies
No need to. Some people upload games in other languages than english. While i think it was worth mentionning so people wouldn't be surprised it was fine as it was. Well an english version did allow me to play your game, so thanks.
Game switches back to spanish around the picture incident though "Por que haces..." and "Dime tu nombre."
There is also a couple occurences during wich i suspect you've been offered several translations and copied both instead of chosing one. I think so because on these occurences there are two times the same sentences with sometimes a small variation in them.
There are also recuring occurences of Valentine's mother being referenced to as male -He or Him- while it should be "she" or "her". Same with Valentine herself when the Main Character interrogates himself about his decision to tell her about the dreams.
After the MC told Valentine he promises they'd meet again i ran into an error, probably a missing or not well referenced picture
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script
scene 109ss with dissolution
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>
scene 109ss with dissolution
NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in script
scene 109ss with dissolution
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1439, in execute
paired = renpy.python.py_eval(self.paired)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2276, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2269, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/script.rpy", line 1786, in <module>
scene 109ss with dissolution
NameError: name 'dissolution' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
A Father and Daughter 1.3.1
Thu Dec 22 10:31:29 2022
[/code]
I tried various playthrough, maybe i did not pick every options, but i think that's the gist of it
It was a nice little game, i wonder what's next, keep up the good work.
Comments like yours are worth gold, I am sorry for the errors in the novel, I have already made a note to correct them quickly.
Again, I appreciate you taking the time to write a review and point out the flaws.
They beat me to it. lol. I was going to let you know aswell. I play a lot of these games and I tend to watch for bugs and such. Guess being a programmer helps. hehe. I like the game so far, can't wait for the update.
Likewise, I am grateful for the mere intention. It really helps me a lot that you take so much trouble.